14 Haziran 2013 Cuma

MY REVISED JOURNAL (2nd Term)

                     Supersize Me: It’s Time To Stop Balming Fat People For Their Size

In this writing, the writer talks about the obesity problem, especially in America. Obesity is an illness which is caused to eat and take a lot of calories.

               
                Obesity is not only in the United States, it is "but also "among the most common illnesses in the World. Some people from every country suffer from this illness. As we said before taking a lot of calories causes this illness. A lot of people go on a diet to get rid of these extra kilos or they have an operation to get the fat out of their body, which is called liposuction. Of course lying under knife is a dangerous subject, it is better to go on a diet than to have an operation.
                Why is there this illness? According to the experts, busy working hours, rushy life and not finding enough time to eat properly and proper foods are some of the reasons. People are so busy during day time and they can not find enough time to eat proper healthy foods and they eat junk food. Junk food consists of a lot of calories and this causes obesity. And according to some experts, the calory increase in foods causes this illness, as well. They say “1960 McDonald’s food’s calories were around 560 calories, but today’s McDonald’s food’s calories are 1500 and this is too much. İt is almost 3 quarter of the one which experts recommend women to have in a day.” As McDonald’s is most popular in the U.S., Americans suffer from this illness much more than other country people.
                In conclusion, Obesity is a serious health problem and people should try to get rid of it as soon as possible by doing some exercises and going on a diet. If we control the amount of  calories we take in a day, we can get rid of this illness and live in a good health and we can have a good appearance.

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