26 Eylül 2014 Cuma
14 Haziran 2013 Cuma
MY REVISED JOURNAL (2nd Term)
Supersize Me:
It’s Time To Stop Balming Fat People For Their Size
In this writing, the writer talks about the obesity problem, especially in America. Obesity is an illness which is caused to eat and take a lot of calories.
In this writing, the writer talks about the obesity problem, especially in America. Obesity is an illness which is caused to eat and take a lot of calories.
Obesity
is not only in the United States, it is "but also "among the most common illnesses in the World.
Some people from every country suffer from this illness. As we said before
taking a lot of calories causes this illness. A lot of people go on a diet to
get rid of these extra kilos or they have an operation to get the fat out of their
body, which is called liposuction. Of course lying under knife is a dangerous
subject, it is better to go on a diet than to have an operation.
Why is
there this illness? According to the experts, busy working hours, rushy life
and not finding enough time to eat properly and proper foods are some of the
reasons. People are so busy during day time and they can not find enough time
to eat proper healthy foods and they eat junk food. Junk food consists of a lot
of calories and this causes obesity. And according to some experts, the calory
increase in foods causes this illness, as well. They say “1960 McDonald’s food’s
calories were around 560 calories, but today’s McDonald’s food’s calories are
1500 and this is too much. İt is almost 3 quarter of the one which experts
recommend women to have in a day.” As McDonald’s is most popular in the U.S.,
Americans suffer from this illness much more than other country people.
In
conclusion, Obesity is a serious health problem and people should try to get
rid of it as soon as possible by doing some exercises and going on a diet. If we
control the amount of calories we take
in a day, we can get rid of this illness and live in a good health and we can
have a good appearance.
13 Haziran 2013 Perşembe
REFLECTION ON ARTICLE 3(2nd Term)
Supersize Me:
It’s Time To Stop Balming Fat People For Their Size
Obesity
is not only in the United States, it is among the most common illnesses in the World.
Some people from every country suffer from this illness. As we said before
taking a lot of calories causes this illness. A lot of people go on a diet to
get rid of these extra kilos or have an operation to get the fat out of their
body, which is called liposuction. Of course lying under knife is a dangerous
subject, it is better to go on a diet than an operation.
Why is
there this illness? According to the experts, busy working hours, rushy life
and not finding enough time to eat properly and proper foods are some of the
reasons. People are so busy during day time and they can not find enough time
to eat proper healthy foods and they eat junk food. Junk food consists of a lot
of calories and this causes obesity. And according to some experts, the calory
increase in foods causes this illness, as well. They say “1960 McDonald’s food’s
calories were around 560 calories but today’s McDonald’s food’s calories are
1500 and this is too much. İt is almost 3 quarter of the one which experts
recommend women to have in a day.” As McDonald’s is most popular in the U.S.,
Americans suffer from this illness much more than other country people.
In
conclusion, Obesity is a serious health problem and people should try to get
rid of it as soon as possible by doing some exercises and going on a diet. İf we
control the amount of calories we take
in a day, we can get rid of this illness and live in a good health and we can
have a good appearance.
REFLECTION ON ARTICLE 2(2nd Term)
Powerphrases: The key to gaining respect
Respect
is one of the most important values in the World. In turkish culture, respect
has an important place, too. Gaining respect is not an easy subject. As it is
hard to gain respect, it is easy to lose the respect you have gained.
There
are some kinds of gaining respect. One of the important ones is powerphrases,
saying more things with less word. This is not an easy aspect. A few people
manage to use this method. By using this method, one can gain respect but this
is not the only case to gain respect.
In this
writing, the writer talks about how important usage of less words to tell more.
That is what powerphrases is and how it is done. Using powerphrases makes an
important influence on the audience. If you tell more things with less words,
people will respect you more. As we said before, respect is not easy to gain. People
should make some effort to gain it. Making good impression, influence on people
is an important fact.
Age and
social status are some of the factors which make people respect you. But age
and social status are not always enough to be respected. You need to combine
age, social status and powerphrases. In your daily life you should have all of
these. There is education of using powerphrases. One should get this education
to use powerphrase properly. And besides, you should have knowledge about
powerphrases and how to use it. When we combine all of these things, we can
gain much more respect from the people who are around us.
In
conclusion, gaining respect is not easy, we should make some effort to gain it.
You should deliver what you are talking about to the listener – audience correctly
properly.
REFLECTION ON ARTICLE 1(2nd Term)
CAN WOMEN AND
MEN BE FRIENDS
In this writing, the writer
mainly talks about the possible relationship between men and women. He put
pressure on the subjects of the genders.
Firstly I agree with the writer. In
today’s World, women and men are almost equal to eachother. But their characteristic features and their
pleasures are different, so this may be a block for them to be friends. But a
lot of people try to tolerate these differences. And they are trying to be
friends.
In some cases both men and women
share common habits. This lead them to be friends easily. For example, They love
the same music group and this bring them
together. They love the same films and
they come together. Sharing common habits, people can become friends.
They can be friend in terms of
occupation subject. For example, Doctors can be friends with opposite sex
doctors or nurses. Female teachers can become friends with male teachers. Primary
school, high school, university students can be friends as they spend some time
together. And sometimes, they become even lovers when they do common things or
spend time together.
And There
is cross-sex relationships as well as opposite-sex relationships. In this
situations people create more comfortable atmosphere. Men can easily share
their thoughts and opinions with their male friends. And they can keep their
secrets among themselves. When they spend time with cross-sex friends, both
women and men become more comfortable and relaxed. They can speak easily what
they want or think. When women come together, they especially talk about their
emotional aspects. And women can talk about their own problems with cross-sex
friends.
In
general aspect women and men can be friends when they share common things or
they spend time together. Even they might be lovers if they share much more
time together. But in cross-sex relationships, both men and women become more
relaxed and comfortable
.
TELEVISION IS HARMFUL! MULTIMEDIA (2nd Term)
Television is bad for the brain
As we can see in the video, television has got a lot of bad influences on our physical and mental health. It emits a lot of radiaton. Radiation effects our body and our brain badly. It may cause cancer. It may cause visual problems as well. Those who watch television stay in a place for a long time without moving. This causes body problems such as backache, neckache, headache. It has bad influences in terms of finance. It consumes electricity a lot. Television prices are really expensive. I think expensive televisions are not needed, low priced television may meet our needs. It causes children badly. It effects children’s mental health and their development really badly. Children take television characters as a model in terms of violence and bad behaviour. To sum up, television has a lot of bad effect on people.
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