THE SLOGAN “I BRAIN ODTU”
I dont actually agree with those
who found the slogan “I BRAIN ODTU”. It means that I think of Odtu. We cannot
decide on a slogan only in a way, this slogan is in the purpose of only the
thinking ability. We also live feel smell ODTU. A slogan must make people be aware
of the beauties around them.Therefore, the slogan should be an attractive amd
it should draw attention of those who hear it.
My own slogan for ODTU is Mutually Experiencing The Unlimitedness. That
is, it is about gaining knowledge, experience from the unlimitedness such as
resources, beauties, old experiences, technology that ODTU has.
I dont actually agree with those..(punctuation mistake)
YanıtlaSilI cannot decide on a slogan only in a way, this slogan is in the purpose of only the thinking ability. (sentence structure)
We also live feel smell ODTU (missing conjunction)
Therefore, the slogan should be an attractive amd it should draw attention of those who hear it. (spelling-missing word)
Dear Mesut,
I enjoyed reading your journal. You’ve explained your ideas clearly. Also,you have presented your extraordinary ideas by this journal. But, you have some mistakes that I’ve mentioned above. If you correct them, you’ll be able to express yourself better. Besides, congratulations on your courage to talk about your ideas without any hesitation. I’m looking forward to reading your other journals.